/lit/ - Literature

>Working on book
>Pause to check /v/
>There's a thread on writing books

For fucks sake this thread is better than the entirety of /lit/.

My book is about rabbits. Please look for it soon.

I am writing one, please look for it soon.

I'm posting my junk again. I've posted it a couple times in the past, some months and months ago, and have extensively revised and edited it.
It's the first couple chapters from my novel about space bunnies(and rural poverty/drug use).

http://pastebin.com/kJV6yAWC

Sorry if the formatting is a little fucked.
Please tell me what you think.

I posted some of this in the last thread, it's part of my book I'm about halfway through writing.

It's about a man who finds a rabbit dying in a parking lot, and nurses it back to health. He soon finds the rabbit is much more than it appears, however. Meanwhile, a strange new drug has become popular in his tiny podunk town.
I'll drop a link, read as much or as little as you'd like.
http://insomwrites.tumblr.com/post/144848742959/moondust-prologue

I'll do some critique in a moment.

>>8133762
Thank you for the encouragement, it means a lot. I really want to make something that entertains people.

Here's some bunnies.