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I need help seeing what I should take out or add in to make this paper sound good:

Topic:
Analyzing the degree to which Kahneman’s findings about how people think accounts for the media’s reaction to the case for going to war for Iraq.

Thesis Statement:
Kahneman’s findings explains only somewhat of why the media reacted the way it did before the war in Iraq.

Topic Sentence 1:
Kahneman, through many studies and research, created several concepts to explain how people think and react to certain situations.

Topic Sentence 2:
After the American tragedy of 9-11, the media boomed with making the ones responsible pay for attacking the home front.

Topic Sentence 3:
What Kahneman found through his research is able to explain several key points of why the media reacted irresponsibly during this time period.

Topic Sentence 4:
There are, however, many aspects about how the media reacted that Kahneman cannot explain through his findings.

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