/lit/ - Literature

>>23044471
after the first stanza, I was like, woah this is really good, I should write this guy and tell him that

But then I read your second stanza here and it's like some meh heavy metal song

*cue up the metal band as the singer screams*
You must’ve seen the dirt
Caught beneath my nails
Else, you wouldn’t have run
From such a dirty sight
Do you know why?
Why it’s even there?
I work for you.
You don’t even know my name.
But I bleed and bleed like a stuck pig
Every wound cleans me out
And I’m stone again.

But the rest of it's alright, by the time I read the 4th stanza I was thinking maybe I should write this guy and encourage him. But decided not to. Can't believe these people were impressed
>>23044764
>>23051497
But it's what got me to finally write