/lit/ - Literature

Hey /lit/

It's been near a year, but I've finally started writing again. Well, at least, I somehow managed to break throug the procrastination, if just for tonight.

I'm working on a short story that's going to need a bit more research on Vietnam, Buddhism, and drugs, but I was wondering if I could get some constructive feedback on what I have so far.

It's my first draft, unedited, not great by any means, but I'm looking for specifics on how [un?]interesting it is, and where I can improve.

Pic related.