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First sentence was kinda wordy. Most of the first paragraph was. Then again mine's kinda wordy too, I think, lol.

The rest from there is solid gold in my opinion. It sounds like you've got the know-how of book referencing (p.s. I'm no expert in that so my opinion on the matter might be worthless.) And the second paragraph certainly had a good draw in there, an air of mystery that made me want to keep going. Good job, anon.


Here's mine. (Warning: Fantasy Genre)

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