/lit/ - Literature

Oh nice, an erotica general.

I will take advantage of this opportunity to post the first two parts of my WIP forced feminisation story.

The style is a pastiche of hard-boiled detective fiction. I haven't yet got to any of the actual erotica, but hopefully the prose is enough of a smooth and entertaining read that it doesn't feel like a drag.

All critique welcome. If you can guess the plot twist, you get to name one of the characters.

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Here's part one, for anyone interested.

It's had some edits since the last time I posted it, chief among them being that the nighclub is now called Amontillado's, because apparently there are 700 real-life nightclubs already called The Catacomb Club.