/lit/ - Literature

>>20883405
Ok, so you think maybe I could write a good video game then? With time to improve of course.
>>20883411
Oh, definitely not. I'm not asking for a collab I just want to be like Pynchon so my own dialogue is a bit flavorless I feel.
I don't think you sound that enthusiastic about the game idea, it's a branching dialogue game, RPG. Like Deus Ex or Planescape. Getting to the level of Vampire the Masquerade would be more than enough for what it needs to be.
Other than more writing, how can I greatly improve? I'll work on my sentences, get a better flow going on. Thanks.

>>20809303
I don't have to imagine. Reason demands atheism, antihumanism, strict and hard materialism.

>>20787711
I looked up your tag, mind explaining certain things I found?
I'm not fully sure about your motives.

>>20785178
I still can't write, fucker.
I can't do it, all my attempts have been horrible, had to eat the previous one.
I want to do it. I want it.