/lit/ - Literature

>>23495709
I suggest weed or trying some other substance while writing those altered state parts.
More sensible advice: you could play around with repetition to evoke a sense of deja vu in the reader. Have a uniqu sentence or a small list of sentences and disperse them throught the book.
You could play around with the character's perception too by making his/her awareness very small or very big. Spend a sunny afternoon in a park or a field without any particular plans. Watch the ants, touch the grass, look really closely at a flower, etc while converting your experience into words as an exercise.
I like your idea and don't like that other anyone's idea of making it all in italics. I'm happy to offer more suggestions if you wish.