/lit/ - Literature

wrote this the other day, can i get some crit?
i set out to write a short piece about a character with a face on their hand inspired by vampire hunter D (hence the title), but had been reading Lovecraft and wanted to start it like he starts the Dunwich Horror and ended up spending most of the day writing this much. obviously its written in his voice, which i've never attempted before, but i didn't want to just ape him. it took me a really long time to find the right words and I honestly can't tell what to make of it; i think i like it but suspect that it might actually be shit, so feedback is much appreciated