/lit/ - Literature

>>3922878
>Molloy
>The Unnamable
>not recommending the whole trilogy

Sup, niggaz, I'm back and I need you to criticize my new prose.

"The disclosed vacancy of circular apartments, remnant of the old administration, put a certain taciturnity to the entire atmosphere of the block. It was three, or three-and-a-half past noon, and The Gang was the only people to be sighted there, on the chimney rooftops, smoking cigarettes they had stolen from their father's pockets. There was a certain matriarchy present in their staple of five people, three girls and two boys, however, it was not the leaning ratio which had created it, nor was it the strong will-power of Dasha, leader of the pack. Rather, I assume it was the pleasant chemistry between them which transcended the already-frivolous gender roles in the society they grew up in".

Thanks

>>3799370
Alright, let's hate me because of what I am. There's no redemption, I was born to be resented. No friends, no girlfriends, sitting alone in my dismal room on a carpet reeking of semen, with no skills, no prospects, no expectations, destroying my young body with tobacco and drugs. For I was born with all limbs and a perfectly healthy brain, but I was born in a poor family, in a dimwitted country and surrounded by uncreative people. People don't need to meet me or know me to hate me, they just have to know where I'm from to resent me. What a deviant life, what a coarse fate.

Should I do a creative writing course? I think I remember you guys saying it was a bad idea a while ago and I just wanted to clarify.