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Anonymous Sat Jun 13 09:07:39 2015 No.6683174 [View]
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Anyone feel like critiquing my short excerpt?
Posted in the other thread, posting it here too, I figure why waste an opportunity for more critique.
I've been having a lot of trouble with my work quality being inconsistent, and it means that the issues are even more inconsistent
http://pastebin.com/gdgSFt6u

Thank you in advance.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 3 05:14:18 2015 No.6487993 [View] File: 461 KB, 651x965, 1425065080155.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] pic related

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