/lit/ - Literature

>>22906741
Thanks, anon! Duly noted.

Regarding 'copious', I chose that word to elicit an impression of debauchery, excess, and misbehaviour (they are dancing copiously, as one might 'drink copiously'). The aim in doing this, is to communicate the filth of the environ, and the contempt in which the protag holds these people (even though the story is told from the third-person perspective). This attempt might be lost though, because my connotation of the term 'copious' with conspicuous overconsumption is not widely held?

I am very glad that my little excerpt was able to pique your interest! That's very encouraging.