/lit/ - Literature

>>8987573
This is crap that I wrote today.
>http://pastebin.com/1Dx5Dqe8
The main body of the work is me trying to kill Hiddiki Anno, my roommate in the psych ward. Interspersed throughout the main narrative are vignettes set before my hospital stay (mostly of drinking and doing drugs with Osama) and after moving back home to Long Island (mostly of being poor and republican).
I'm trying to write the after chapters in a more sedated tone then the others, to reflect the fact that I'm on my anti-psychotics and more in touch with boring old reality. The problem with this is that it hamstrings my main strength: being crazy.
The part I just posted isn't done, and I worry like it reads too much like my shitty diary, desu.
>pic won't be related until chapter 4

>>8880667
Cry more libcuck

>>8878287
Great argument