/lit/ - Literature

WHAT??? My actions have consequences and now I am in jail? And my father the president won’t let me out?? I thought he loved me, why isn’t he changing my diaper?!

>>18893677
Chainsaw Man

>>18881722
>writing sci-fi schlock
>there’s a special type of liquid armor that soldiers wear
>one character asks another character what it is
>I loredump 2,000 words on the ancient battle between serpentine god-royals and humanity in massive underwater oceans, which ended up with one of the serpents being converted to Catholicism and giving crusaders this magic armor as a token of his faith in our faith that Jesus Christ did for our sins
>already sensing that this information will only be slightly useful down the line
I’m such a retard. I don’t want to delete any of it, but it’s just so out of place that there’s a mini history lesson at this scene. Maybe I’ll just move the story to a bit later in the book.
Fuck.