/lit/ - Literature

>>4248985
>raisin denture

Can someone critique my writing, I want to see how I can improve. Thanks in advance

http://pastebin.com/yWynS6dP

You don't need that book foolin. Go get em young bloood

>>2367899
>advanced bullshit

hey /lit/, list the books that had a profound effect on your life--if any

>mfw i'm a science major
>mfw all my grades are on objective things
>mfw i don't have batshit insane english profs that hate every undergrad's writing anymore

>>2059029
>>2059029

The larger part of the island will make room for the many Anon's while the tripfags are forced to locate themselves in isolation on the few offset islands - seeing as I'd be one of those tripfags (though I'm unsure how Anon would feel about me visiting the mainland,) I would make sure that I had a good amount of literature to bring to the table.

Our island would be primarily comprised of a mash of pseudo-intellectualism (most would eventually just be put to death or something) and brimming with hopefully the most innately civilized of 4channers. We would build a society based on a shared love of knowledge from previously written books and use them to an extent to help shape/learn the tools of trade to build up a great society.

I'd also hope we'd all be Beta people so as nobody would exactly find it smart to try and take the lead - we would be a well balanced little commune.

Though...I hope some Anon would be so kind to remove the Raptors on the outlands for a tripfag.

>>1965139

>>1960330

Will do.

>>1951087
>>1951087
>>1951087

I like it!

(Except the boats.)

>>1938127

Tao Lin Is The Best Writer In World!

>>1785422

This thread could never happen in /sci/.

Good job /lit/. I'm impressed.

>>1621462
Oh, thanks! You know, the way you said it, it seemed like you meant something else.

>>1453224

>The Sun Also Rises by Ernest Hemingway

>>1207483
>phased
>he meant "fazed"
>spell checker doesn't compare against bad vocabulary
>mfw he attempts a critique in the same post

>>1194637
holy shit, I would marry this girl in a second. Look at her wishlist. She's like sweetened butter on the toast of your life.

>>1175280
what he said

>>986174
>>986172
>>986168

Thanks.