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Is my metre any wrong senpai? I think it's a mess, isn't it?

On what year or what month?
Or day, or hour, or minute?
There can't be any run
--Oh, young days were quite fun.
From omens of death, innit true?

Your life was such a waste
But no need for a haste
Judgement is at the gate
--Not bothered about it, wasn't you?
Still God tries to make up with you.

The dusk comes nears the verge
Dawn is in front of your face.
Doth the thief has the urge?
No man knows, all is a grace.

>>8561664
I like this.