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>>10104593
Please split your words into paragraphs please, a little confusing. Also a little too vile for my virgin eyes, though it looked like it was going somewhere funny there - until the German Bratwursts started firing off on all directions. Sentence structure seemed fine for how far I got, short stack bursts of sentences just like how I want them, but no prose early on - very direct. Pol/10


Here's Mine:
https://pastebin.com/hWBw4rEw

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Someone once told me I could market this to 14 year old girls. Can someone check?

https://pastebin.com/du7mp2Fg

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