/lit/ - Literature

>>8780437
I maneuvered the best I could in reading your wonderful prose but my mind was elsewhere. I haven’t eaten for days. I'm famished. I suddenly needed to roll my irii against something sexy and as I reached your offering, emerging from my brain fog, there was a bright neon sign flashing on and off that read: FUCKING GARBAGE FUCKING BORING IMITATION.

>>6973625
• marine impotence ← pick one

• don't need 'tyrannical'

• 'rarely intentional' ← you've been attr intention throughout the ¶ so 'sometimes intentional'?

• ...time being. Mornings are...

• 'clouted' isn't yr best option

• last night it would

• Addy is a boy's name?

• kill yr semicolon ye didn't do it right anyway

• it's 'vigor' if yr American

Reminds me of Dickens... in fact, when I googled yr post b/c it seems a little too good for /lit/, Dickens came up but there was no exact match. r u chettin me dolan?

& I like yr setting