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>british wording
first of all, fuck all british cunts for 31st March 1939.

Second of all, I'd probably just make the character behave as if they are stressed under pressure and make certain innuendos towards external factors, only briefly noting that they are in vicinity of protagonist, not directly mentioning that they look at their face. PULL A RED HERRING ON EM' BRUV.

"twitching and straying with his gaze, he found himself a little shaken emotionally. They were in a dark, rusted lift which was rasping for mercy as it ascended upwards. the [protagonist] standing before him didn't seem bothered in the slightest, but he was sweating bullets, though composed on the outside, his demeanor was betrayed by subtle smell of fear."

here's my attempt at drawing out such a scene of ptsd without forming direct connections to the face.

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