/lit/ - Literature

Here's something I wrote today. Wouldn't mind getting some feedback:

Imagine licking the mouse of a library computer, how salty it would be. The same hands which sift through garbage at night use it to play FarmVille once the sun has risen. It would be like licking dozens of sad and strange masturbations, masturbations the likes of which you can hardly conceive. You would taste the remains of countless exotic and greasy meals, the brass of the city's doors, the sweat of a thousand men. Feel your tongue slowly drag along the rugged plastic, the ticking bulge of the scroll wheel rolling along as you do. Taste the ancients flavours hidden within the crevices: sour, bitter, sweet. Your tastebuds, on high alert, struggle to perceive all the subtle nuances at once. Contradictory information fills your brain, you are overwhelmed. Truly, this is a transcendental experience.