/lit/ - Literature

Anonymous Thu Apr 1 03:42:17 2021 No.17918379 [View]
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I wrote something for the first time in years that wasn't rambling in my diary. It's about a streamer continually traumatizing herself for her audience.
https://pastebin.com/iaNapXrQ

I'm ESL, the shooting it's referencing is old news at this point. It clocks at about 900 words. My biggest worry right now is getting tenses wrong or turning the story into an incomrehensible order.
I'd appreciate it if someone could have a look and tell their thoughts.

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