/lit/ - Literature

Hey e/lit/es

This is a piece of translation I made from my own novel which was not written in English.

Tell me what you think.
T.Hanks in advance.

http://pastebin.com/xPGwhHjK

Well, you know or don't you kennet or haven't I told you every telling has a taling and that's the he and the she of it. Look, look, the dusk is growing! My branches lofty are taking root. And my cold cher's gone ashley. Fieluhr? Filou! What age is at? It saon is late. 'Tis endless now senne eye or erewone last saw Waterhouse's clogh as if dancing the boogaloo.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1cuccco2umo

Please everyone, this thread belongs in /pol/
gtfo lit pls