/lit/ - Literature

>>18956410
i started at 21. i did hip hop dance as a kid for a year or so but no real training. i was brought on as an extra in a yearly recital of the nutcracker. you just stood there in a suit for a party scene. either way they propositioned me to try a few classes and after a bit they offered a scholarship in exchange for becoming the lead male danseur at the studio. 6 years later and im at the top of my game, ive been to NYC dance studios, (i hate NYC), and i had to move, so no more dance. back to being extremely online.

>>11291397
I like a look of agony,
Because I know its true;
Men do not sham convulsion,
Nor stimulate a throe.

The eyes glaze once, and that is death.
Impossible to feign
The beads upon the forehead
By homely anguish stung.

>not wanting to die in your death-obsessed thot's arms.

/lit/, how can I improve on writing? To be more specific, essay styled writing. I have never been too profound with writing and it's frustrating that I can't construct sentences properly.
Do you have any advice?