/lit/ - Literature

I need to get some sleep, but i made a promise in the last thread i needed to keep. an anon said that it felt like paragraphs got longer and the pacing seemed to be speeding up, so ive started by extending one 440 word paragraph describing my time on Lopez into two pages and 1100 more words. Today's addition has not been proofread, and ive been writing for the past four hours after work when i should have been sleeping. my notes are still in there for things after, but heres an updated link: https://drive.proton.me/urls/RN2B9HTX34#1tQcOqa0EBbd

Thanks /lit/, i'm glad im writing again.
pic related: excerpt of my expansion