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>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 14 04:43:44 2022 No.20835106 [View] File: 638 KB, 2120x7832, amp012_dinner.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >reposting for critique Dinner, &amp issue 012. The world hates you, and only you. Please tell me what does or doesn't suck about this.

Anonymous Sat Aug 6 04:48:51 2022 No.20794617 [View]
File: 638 KB, 2120x7832, amp012_dinner.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>20794569
If it's not too masturbatory, can you critique something else? Hoping to catch you before your attention burns up. Pic related is something else I sent in to &amp that I felt had a better narrative, so I'd like to know if I was more successful with that one. It still had awkward diction, but I do feel it had direction.

>>20794613
>try not to circumcise my photography like that
Any idea what's his in the older issues?

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