/lit/ - Literature

>>22482523
no way, he is overweight, cannot manage his ego, cannot force himself to improve, is a stoner and lacks critical vision. While he is rich, I'll become rich much faster if I don't look up to others but down on myself, focusing on improving what I've got, not attaing what I have not.

>>22459669
go forth and conquer, a man who remains in his domain invites others to visit it, for ill or else.
Your writing is ok, and you should keep writing.