/lit/ - Literature

so i've had an idea for a manga for a while now, and i'm just doing some research, i want a few opinions, and here's the basic premise; it's set in the future, doesn't matter how far, but it starts out with a well equipped research team studying a planet that has a high possibility for a new earth, as the old earth has used up all of it's recources, the team gets killed by some unknown creatures that inhabit the planet, and a rescue/ extermination party is sent in. it turns out that the planet has been overrun with what can only be described as dinosaurs on steroids because of the planets low gravity. the team gets cut off from the orbiting research station and has to fight their way to and old pirating ship hidden away at the center of the planet, fighting off these carnivorous beasts and finding research members along the way. any ideas on how to make it better? I think i'm gonna go with the name RAPTOR but it's up for discussion:) thanks guys