/lit/ - Literature

>>20166813
It’s well written and descriptive, but is this a solitary piece or excerpt? It’s good for flash fiction, but too verbose for me to want a whole short story like this. Heck, it could even work if you formatted it as poetry. But, as early as the first paragraph, I was thinking “this guy is trying to get his money’s worth for his Thesaurus.” *I* liked reading it, but a larger audience may tire of it before finishing.