/lit/ - Literature

>>14871389
It’s just a paragraph, but the beginning of a fantasy novel I’ve been working on for a while.

I want to tell you a story. One where you walk on every word like an old path that leads to the twilight of its end. The trail is long and winds toward far off lands and people. I don’t know what you’ll find on your journey, be it of forbidden love, crownless kings, or finding joy in the little things. But when the last page comes and goes, I’ll be there waiting, and hope that you'll have heard a tale of the endless horizon and what lies beyond our simple lives.

Can someone rate the intro to my fantasy novel?

I want to tell you a story. One where you walk on every word like an old path that leads to the twilight of its end. The trail is long and winds toward far off lands and people. I don’t know what you’ll find on your journey, be it of forbidden love, crownless kings, or finding joy in the little things. But when the last page comes and goes, I’ll be there waiting, and hope that you'll have heard a tale of the endless horizon and what lies beyond our simple lives.