/lit/ - Literature

>>10986964

> every square inch

no. this is the descriptive part, you use some common adage. Are you writing for idiots?

>>Mom screamed and the house awoke in terror. My blood froze and what curse did awaken this sleeping omen I knew not. Quickly I sought refuge for my crossword workbook, another scream, Mother will be coming soon to shred all my work I thought to myself, to tear through my progress, to leave me with nothing on a lonely night again. A laugh. Two small blue pills from her cabinet allowed me to cope and I did what usually do; lock the door, curl in bed, grip Pooh and imagine my heavy breathing belonged to his soft yellow bear fur. Petrified, I cried like a baby animal. The horror he hid from approached in waves of smashing, crashing, giggles and screams, fear teary eyed dampening his clothed lifeless stuffed animal.

thats off the cuff mofo your welcome now write like you actually enjoy reading and not like "HUR HUR IMA WRITEERRRRR"