/lit/ - Literature

I haven't written on this project in more than a year, but I was inspired staring at my ceiling, remembering the life I used to live, so I wrote 686 words. Feedback welcome. The idea of the project was everything takes place at a bar from open to close for one night. Bands, social groups, workers, etc. All intermingled like all the toxic scenes we know and love to hate to be a part of. Let me know what you think. I haven't touched the like 20k words of the rest of it, so this was more kinda fresh start type writing. The scale and scope gives me lots of anxiety so I never work on it. I'd like to use it as a documenting of that period of my life. I'm getting too old for it now.

https://pastebin.com/XeHripci