/lit/ - Literature

Sup /lit/! I've been working for days on a new story so here it is. Critique is welcome.

On a cold winter's morning I found myself wandering around Central Park in New York City. It was gently snowing, and I was cold. "Should've stayed in line at the homeless shelter" I said to myself. I pulled my thin leather jacket tighter around myself and folded my arms as I kept my slow reliant pace around the park. "Fuck this, I'm gonna go ride the busses." I sat down at the bus bench and waited for that giant square to arrive. I looked at the coupon I had. 5 free bus rides it said. That was enough for today, enough to escape the cold. I saw the lifeless square pull up and open it's doors. The driver nearly spit at me. I just handed him a coupon and walked to the back of the bus. It smelt of dried piss and dead people. I hated sitting back here, but it's the only place where I don't get ridiculed.

Have you guys ever read Twilight? If you entry-level retards can get passed the 1million rabid fangirls and read deeply into the book you'll find something amazing.(If you can do that)

First of all Edward represents Humanity's desire to live forever, but also represents loneliness. This is why Edward loves Bella, because it will break his perpetual lonlieness.

Edward also embodies man's hatred towards nature. It is why Edward sparkles in the sun It's distinguishing himself from the other humans who do not hate the environment like Edward does.

Jacob represents homosexuality. Long has it been understood that lust is more of an animal instinct. The only reason he "wants" Bella is so that Edward cannot have bella, because bella is the only girl who will talk to Jacob because he is a fat loser kid who sits alone at lunch.

tl;dr philosophers are retarded