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>> No.20983141 [View]
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Anyone willing to read the first chapter of my NEET novel? It's a little under 6k words. I'm six chapters in. I thought I had something with it, but now I'm not so sure. I just want some feedback.

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Is there a way to bring up 4chan in my novel without it coming across as cringe? My protagonist is a NEET who spends most of his day at home, so I'm not bringing it up just for the sake of bringing it up.

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