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Anonymous Tue Jan 9 00:47:56 2024 No.22925255 [View]
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I know it's long but I wrote this and would appreciate any feedback. It is my attempt at a start of a Terry Pratchett-esque fantasy/comedy. It's just the first chapter.

It's likely cringe but the only way to get better is to try. So, I would appreciate any advice. Especially when it comes to just the prose in general.

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