/lit/ - Literature

I actually don't know why I bothered reading all this shit. It became evident in the first third that this wasn't going to be good. I actually got half way through the second book before dropping it. I'll probably never touch anything by this guy ever again. It just sucks so so much. I guess I just wanted to know what was going to become of the battlestation, but it isn't worth it. Cool concept, I guess, but the rest of it sucks.

There is not a single character in the books that has any charisma. They are all completely one-dimensional. The main character of the first book actually managed to lose personality as the book progressed. I can't remember any other name of that book. The characters of the second book are even worse. The author's pet girl "hmm me so independent stronk wymen, don't leer at me stupid men" is absolutelly annoying and completely irrelevant to any plot. So is every other character, except the MC of the first book, but he rarely appears in this book. The prose is absolutely terrible. He drops acronyms like like punctuations, and 100 pages later he finally tells you what it means, maybe. He divides the dialog of the characters with absolutely irrelevant pieces of information, and when the dialog finally returns you have no idea what the fuck is going on anymore.

Don't bother with this crap.