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>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 15 23:03:51 2013 No.3855040 [View] File: 54 KB, 500x533, 1368130758090.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Posted this a few nights ago. Never got any critiques. http://pastebin.com/fMqvhfhz It's short, don't worry.

Anonymous Wed Jun 5 23:26:19 2013 No.3826634 [View]
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http://pastebin.com/xS0Nu1KP

First few parts of a story I'm working on.
Would really appreciate it if someone took a look at it and gave me some critique.
I've gotten this far, and now I'm starting to question whether I should go on or scrap it and start something new.

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