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Anonymous Wed Sep 12 00:55:25 2012 No.2973799 [View]
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>>2973735
Here's a poem I'm working on. I'd appreciate feedback of any kind.

Surface perfection
And that of physique
Needs not explanation
To enjoy its mystique

Pure emotion
A trick of the mind
Merely illusion
With nothing behind

Depth perception
And being unique
An empty ocean
Swum by the meek

Sure elation
You will soon find
In caress of lotion
On woman's behind

Beautiful connection
For all who seek
Without introspection
Through shallow technique

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