/lit/ - Literature

>>22998285
Good, no issues here. I'd suggest adding other descriptive elements just so that you're not reliant on people knowing or looking up what lenticular is (in the context of clouds). A latter passage referring to the cloud as a disk or a spinning top would suffice, so long as it evokes the shape you're going for.
>>22998295
Lenticular is literally the name of the clouds, it's not merely being used as an adjective for the sake of being fancy.