/lit/ - Literature

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Ey, thanks for this feedback anon, I very much appreciate it.
>Again, this could be a taste difference, but to throw out my opinion I'd say it would have the most impact if this was a very focused and tight character driven story rather than grand narrative driven with a lot of world building.
That's how I plan to execute this story, mostly. Vexkamus is supposed to be a character driven entirely by how people see him, or rather, what he thinks people think of him. That's just the first half of the story.

And as for the world buildilng part...Funny thing is, I actually don't do a lot of worldbuilding. In fact, I actually kind of dislike it. Same goes for building magic systems and shit.