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Anonymous Tue Apr 9 06:42:00 2024 No.23268965 [View]
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This is the first page of a horror story I am writing. Any feedback is appreciated, but there are specific three questions I have:

1. Would you keep reading?

2. Thematically, what type of story would you think it is based on the first page?

3. Is there anything else I could be doing to create suspense? It is my first time trying to do horror stuff.

Thanks

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