/lit/ - Literature

i made a post last week with my unformatted draft.

if anyone who read it is here again, im about a third of the way through reformatting it as a screenplay format.

https://pastebin.com/3kdTwanv

my comic is mostly visual, so there's little dialogue for majority of scenes, so if im not using action lines correctly, or if there's a better way to format actions without dialogue, i would appreciate the advice.

ill post the rest of the screenplay draft when its finished, for now im only asking for format advice since that is what most who read it had a problem with.

thanks everyone who gave advice last week.

reposting from old thread.
4k words but its the full outline of my graphic novel before i start thumbnailing.
apologies on messy structure, im more of a visual person and will attempt making a better format for sharing soon. for now, it serves its purpose for me artistically when making the panels.

https://pastebin.com/GHXysx1d

I'm working on a graphic novel. would love some feedback. im more a visual person, so excuse my writing style compared to what you're used to when reading others subs, this may take a bit more imagination. it is a GRAPHIC novel draft after all.

https://pastebin.com/GHXysx1d