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TWI 9.10W-9.11W
Is it me or has Wiskeria's character been completely rewritten in this volume?
I recall her being just this cute, tad awkward witch, competent but slightly insecure, kinda talkative, always tugging on her hat and adjusting her glasses
But in these last two chapters she's felt wayyyy too much like Belavierr, just full on autismo barely knowing how to act human and it's kinda sad since she was one of my favourite characters
It's kinda in line with how some characters have been acting in this volume so far though, more often than not acting like caricatures of themselves, specially Erin, some passages have had me actually cringing with how overdone it's been
I hope the writing returns a bit back to normal
Also, quick note on V8 ending
It was alright, but holding all the happenings and twists for the last two-ish chapters was a mistake
You can't just build up so many storylines and hint to so many things only to have the payoff of all of them at the same time and barely have any of them hit home
idk

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