/lit/ - Literature

/LIT/ GOOD WRITING CRITIQUE THREAD

RULES:

1. Critique someone else's writing before you post yours
2. Only post something that you have proofread and reasonably reflects your writing ability

If you want relevant feedback, it's generally a good idea to post some questions or areas you'd like the focus to be on.

Let's see how long we can make this a good critique thread before it devolves into shitty navel-gazers just splurging their free/automatic writing shit for validation