/lit/ - Literature

>>22626805
Ask to examine why she is so engrossed in undulating lines

>>21499327
>Some kind of writing tutorial?
Somewhat, yes. They write well, and through exposure you will subconsciously improve.
>The doorknob—and the door around it—gave way; leaving the knob hanging out of place. He backs towards his bed-side drawer, using it like a physical and emotional crutch as he watch the door swing open. Through doorway came an unwashed man with filthy face and unkempt beard who dash himself against the wall.
I don't believe what I've here offered you as fixes suffice for good writing. Your writing is quite bad. I mean no offense by that, but it is true. You seem possessed of some sentence-schematic which you do not stray from. It seems to go like this: [Clause], [Minor clause], [Final clause]. Try reading a plethora of authors and not just King.