/lit/ - Literature

A few days ago I came up with a character concept for an epic fantasy and wrote a sort of 'prologue' detailing that character's motivation. It is 1.5k and I wrote it in about an hour and haven't seen it since, so it probably has some mistakes. I know it may seem a bit long, but it is a 5min read. I won't be working in this project for some time since I haven't developed it much, and I already have another novel in the works. Still, I want some crit on my writing style as English is not my native language, and if the concept is good enough to catch people's attention.

Here's the link:
https://docdro.id/Ibw5EYN