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Anonymous Fri Oct 9 21:09:22 2020 No.16545743 [View]
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>>16543543
Could I get some feedback on the outline for my story? It's only 2.5 pages.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tbDrWH3HiUaebeAYaladnV1O8f7ZFvUk3r20pxT97lY/edit

How does it feel to you structurally?
Notice any flaws?
Areas you feel might need more clarity when I go over the screenplay again?

It's for a comic/manga. This would be the 4th draft more or less. I've redone the script a few times. If you want to read the screenplay, maybe done this Sunday. The comic manuscript... probably Sunday too. About 50% of it is done from previous edits.

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