/lit/ - Literature

>>17854663
>yes, they were regularly frequented by nature and undisturbed by humans, how could you tell?
anyway, you should give a hint at the start so the ending becomes an 'aha' moment instead of something confusing and unrelated. the brown muck and putrid smell at the start made me think she took a shit in the soil.
and i'm afraid i didn't feel any of he fear or guilt if that was your original aim, especially since we had no idea what she was hiding. the story didn't have much going for itself either. i say draw up a simple outline to organize your ideas next time.
you do at least seem to have some rough sense of prose. polish it, keep writing. i'm the prompter.