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>>18400656
Wrote this a while back, I forgot if I posted this, and if I did, I forgot the critique you guys gave me, do you mind if you could give me more critique.

It’s a capepunk/psychological story. Hope that helps.

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>>18400656
>>18400656
Wrote this a while back, I forgot if I posted this, and if I did, I forgot the critique you guys gave me, do you mind if you could give me more critique.

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Posted this yesterday, got one decent critique. Wondering if I’ll get more b

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You guys ever had trouble in starting the first chapter of your story? I'm honestly just been writing, trying to see what I like enough to keep. Pic related.

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