/lit/ - Literature

>>18191293
Fair point, I might have gone too far with this poem. The main idea is that rural boomers are so out of touch and pace with the urbanites that they become an invisible backdrop to high society, relegated to occasionally being a resource to be exploited ie.: robbed and killed, but not integrated. With no real incentive from the state or 'society' to keep them afloat, (because they are weak, stubborn and deteriorating) they are simply dehumanized, then are left being burned away along with their legacy. The stabwound 'bellyache' belongs no longer to the dying boomer, but to their clothes. No one could have thus seen a stabbing since no one was stabbed, that is the legal defense. Like a mockery of a platoon of soldiers, an adventurous 'tide' (a pull of moons, a stretch, I know) of urbanites riot in the countryside as a pastime activity under the guise of the night (as if the moon pulled them out of the city, the metaphor worked better in my head). Those boomers who voluntarily shut themselves off are robbed, those who willingly stand on the porch are more respected, so they only get set aflame without the robbery part, at the end.The ghosts the mob refers to are these elderly residents. (the "night air" is meant to be a third policeman reference) The poem ends with no hope for a better future, the countryside is burned again, along with the archaic way of living associated with it (kettles and farmhouses). Thanks for the feedback boys, I will try to improve this and think of a suitable title.

>>17002790
Amazing post OP, honestly, great insight, well done, good job. Congratulations. I have a raging erection and I've only read it once. I'm afraid reading it again I'd bust the fattest nut. You must have an IQ well over 140. I'd love to meet you and listen to you in real life. Your words radiate a deep tone and a sharp jawline. Maybe invite you out for dinner. Not say a word, just listen to your wisdom. I'd pay of course. Call me. Please.

>>16814537
>Szerb Antal
bázisolt

>>16401794

>destroys trannies on twatter
how is jk so based?

>>14119138