/lit/ - Literature

Mhmmm. Everybody, may I have your attention

ESL here, I wrote something and I'd like some feedback, please do not forget that english isn't my main language (but if my text is shit, tell me, I can take it)
>Here it goes:
Dread or hope?
Self as companion
Uncontrollable is the wake of fate
Dread or hope?
Truth is known
Only to be ignored by foolish trope
Dread or hope?
A tremor of anguish, faint as can be
is enough to shake thee
Damned be my shackles
Damned be the weight I gave me
The secrets it keeps
as it seduces my soul
Only to whip it
with tortuous hold
cry, protected by him,
cry, forgetting that he,
kept the sweetest fruits for your lips,
kept the strongest winds from your hips
cry, as I hold the guileless
cry, foolish love of digress